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Adrian Winchell:
Good job, could use a little follow through on stuff like the squirrel's tail - all the holds move, but are a little long, and could stand to have some instantaneous reaction to the others' lines. I'm a little confused as to how exactly he's sitting at/on the table, but that's not related to the animation really. Overall, it's a solid piece!
Oh and I just caught that he was holding an acorn up on his tail- it's a little hard to see, and he neither raises it pointedly or gestures at it, so it's not clear that he's doing it on purpose.
Joep de Laat:
the animal is pretty small.. you might want to make some shots more up close...
Animator: Chloe Deneuve
Description: A chef serves a squirrel a meal but it's not quite what he expects.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 2 weeks