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A birthday treat
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you need to practice your acting more as it was not right for the scene and your movement was not natural enough and the camera was too far away.
You could have framed this a lot closer so we could see the animation, the background isn't important.
S J Bennett:
Nice animation but a strange framing decision - could have gone in much closer.
Try a closer camera angle with the camera shifted to the left. No need for all that negative space .
Great job, needs some work with staging. See some of the top animations for suggestions!
Animator: Bikramjit Naskar
Description: Friend is a vegiterian....
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 3 weeks