Comments:
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Tafrey Mongkuo:
The keyboard and other desk objects are hovering. The lip flaps are going way to fast and it seems to be a frame by frame open and close. All the movements seem to suffer from this so try slowing it down and adding more fluid motions. When bringing your hand down, it doesn't just stop on a dime there's a little bounce to it.
Rannva Macdonald Arnskov:
This is breaking the 180 degree rule which makes it very confusing to watch
Adrian Winchell:
Don't be afraid to animate the body - you have hand gestures and facial animation, but their trunks really don't move with any of the poses here.
Sabrina Winkel:
The chubby guy his lip moves after "I don't eat meat" I would fix that. Camera switching is too fast
Animator: Mariana Patsi
Description: A liar "confesses" to his doctor, who is very surprised with what he hears...
Experience: Couple of months,this is my first proper animation
Time taken: 2 weeks