Final Rating: 3.47. Finished 169 out of 231 entries.

501 views including the voting period.


Animator: Irene

Description: I wanted to do as better as I can the animation so I'm focused in one character.

Experience: 3 months intense course and 2 year practising by myself

Time taken: 3 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Adrian Winchell:

This is a bit unnerving, the way he's staring straight at the camera, and all his motions are twinned for no apparent reason. Even if they're not exact mirror images, he's moving both sides of his body identically for most of this.

Lucas Donaldson:

The movements between each piece of dialogue, feel a bit too abrupt. I like them alone as keyframes though. nice work!

Jyreme Mcmillon:

I think overall it could benefit from maybe a polish pass to ensure things weren't just stopping or hitting walls....also a few of the body movements seem to have some spacing issues that are making them look jumpy....I think if you can address that it would be a fairly strong piece