Jessica "Jess" Jerome:

love the facial expressions

Eric Raffle:

I feel your shot is a bit dead and you don't have enough motion in your characters, your keeping everything too constant and your lip-sync is too extreme

Mike Schanbacher:

Nice work...I don't think the camera cuts were necessary...I would much rather have seen both characters throughout to see their reactions.

Adrian Winchell:

It's a little hard to see the eyeline on the fat chef, and see if he ever actually makes eye contact with the skinny chef. From a directorial standpoint, would have been nice to see him again at the end!

Shamel Esmaeil:

I wish it was more about the heay cook since his lines are more interesting. Otherwise good animation overall

Rakesh Modi:

Nice subtle acting...

Kendra Kaye Coffey:

Ooo maybe a winner! At the 110 mark that subtle head tuck makes the chef seem contentious and genuine, like he is having a revelation.