Adrian Winchell:

Seems alright, but the character is holding too much - we don't have another shot to keep the scene active so he should be reacting more. I don't think it's particularly natural to hold both arms above the table that long either.

Lucas Donaldson:

Some of these movements are pretty good. "what about the sausage?"

Some of the movements feel rather blended together so it extracts from the realism.

Sabrina Winkel:

I loved his hand gestures and when he face palmed