Eric Raffle:

not enough realistic motions and too many camera changing , could not focus on anything.

Adrian Winchell:

Seems like it's in a rush to get finished. Actions are too short and choppy, almost jerky/stepped at points, and a lot of the lipsync runs in advance of the audio. Second shot's camera needs adjustment - Carnivore appears right where Vegetarian was in the previous shot. Also the cut to the second shot is really way too early.

Thijs Aarts:

Lip sync is off. Not sync

Jyreme Mcmillon:

I think it could be made stronger if the characters had time to react to what was being said...right now it feels as though they are expecting it all up front...I had to see it a couple of times but I think it's making the cuts feel faster and rushed too..I could be wrong about that though

Sabrina Winkel:

Looks good! Not too much moving!