Comments:
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Lea:
Nice solid shot. I do question the intent behind the leatherjacket guy's pose and expression around frame 120. I assume he's meant to look smug and self-righteous, but it kind of comes off more as a 'scheming villain'-pose. I do like the progression from the pose into the more exasperated ones that follow. Nice work :)
Eric Raffle:
could have done better gestures as your acting shots don't fit the scene, how can I say your acting is not something someone would do in real life when talking in this kind of scene with your current characters. lip-sync needs more work.
Adrian Winchell:
Haha, I love that wiggle at 90-130. Waiter seems a little less emotive/expressive than the audio but whatever. :)
David Ramirez:
haha that movement around @128 is great.
Awesome job ob the whole piece!
Nicolás Burmester:
The techinal aspects of your animations are quite well done, but the acting itself doesn't sell your characters and what they are saying, specially the client. You are portraying a picky vegetarian guy who's kinda introvert, you can't go with a cocky john travolta's sidekick on Grease in my opinion.
S J Bennett:
Love that little sassy pyramid finger dance, icing on a very tasty cake.
Yuri Marcel Vieira:
nice expressions
Sam Caudill:
I really like the smugness of the vegetarian! First time I've seen this sort of reaction. Good work!
Animator: WK
Description: I was a vegetarian, I was very embarrassed
Experience: 3 year
Time taken: 7