James Hornby:

the poses seem to sometimes stop dead. You might be able to get away with it a little in 2d but with cg it catches your eye a bit

Robert Firestone:

I like the contrast between the characters

Adrian Winchell:

That waiter is a liiiiittle crazy/over the top for the delivery in the audio.

Joep de Laat:

I got the feeling you are trying to use a lot of "animation tricks" and not necessarily a natural way of acting. that's why the audio and video feel kind of separated from each other In my opinion...

S J Bennett:

Lots of fun to watch.. but that one wiggle of the finger in the air, I don't know what that's about.