Joaquin Casas:

Nice idea.
The tail and the different actions stop suddenly.

sonia:

That's super cute!!!!
is that Balto???

Eric Raffle:

not bad but you needed better paw gestures they were too stiff

Adrian Winchell:

Tells the story okay, but needs more emotive poses and expressions for these characters to really start to act. Maybe don't freeze them so much between actions?

Richard Adams:

Liked your concept, but animation needs polishing. Very floaty. But aspects of this are terrific, especially the brown wolf hanging his head in shame at the end.

Moby:

Nice concept. Camera move could be smoothed out a little.