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Adrian Winchell:
Great work! The facial expressions are all timed wonderfully. The sniff at the beginning might read better with one big inhaled sniff than several short ones, considering the distance of the camera. And something seems too simple about the sausages line's gesture, considering the number of symbols. I think you might get a stronger result on the last pose by using something asymmetrical - leaning on one hand and gesturing with the other for example, or at least detwinning the current gesture. Still, this is one of the better ones I've seen this round. :)
koujikun89:
Great expression! Just the pose of the dad pointing is not working,
Sabrina Winkel:
I liked it. I like the wolfman's facial expressions
Animator: S J Bennett
Description: Werewolf Junior is back from college to stay with his dad, but he's changed.. and not in the way you'd expect!
Experience: Single shot or rough work on/off since 2013. This is my first polished multi-shot narrative scene.
Time taken: Just under 30 hours