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Adrian Winchell:
Are these poses still linearly interpolated? Seems to be a very flat almost machine like quality to the tweening. Lipsync's off a bit - the rule I always heard was to have the jaw open quickly for the vowels then ease closed - in this case it seems the mouths are hitting their open pose well after the sound is already on its way. As for the body positions, I'd recommend trying to imply a little more weight to them, not just the gestures you're going for. There's precious little anticipation or follow through on anything here.
Lucas Donaldson:
nice expression. What might need some work is the lip sync and pose to pose motion.
Animator: David M Daniels
Description: February, 2016 11SecondClub submission. Home made set, using two of the Eleven rigs.
Experience: About a year, give or take. Mostly in school.
Time taken: About 30 hours, including creating the set.