Lucas Donaldson:

Some good starts but doesnt quite look finished. Its a little hard to tell what the background character was doing in the pause in dialogue.

Adrian Winchell:

That is one talented trumpet player, making it sound like a violin - and all without ever pursing his lips to an embouchure. Calm down and ease the torso tilts, they bounce a it too much. Otherwise pretty good!

Richard Adams:

Extremely well done. My only quibble, background musician is rather distracting. Attention needs to stay in the foreground. One of the best entries so far this month.

Joep de Laat:

too much is happening, of which most is not related or supporting to the story...