Comments:
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James Hornby:
some of the acting choices felt a little random. I wasn't super sure what was happening to the poor guy under the table
Adrian Winchell:
It seems like he slides across the floor, rather than pushing himself across the floor. The camera moves are also a little distracting here. All in all tho', a little polish on eases and timing will really bring this up.
Sam Caudill:
Great lip-sync but very floaty on the rest of the animation. Great posing of this character but you should have a few camera cuts to the other character when he's talking.
Sabrina Winkel:
It looks good although I love his posture but the part when he slides back I would fix. Maybe just a shake of his head
Animator: Raj Maheru
Description: I entered this competition to work on my character animating skills. I'm not so good at it and am definitely looking to improve. This piece is far off from what I wanted it to be but I've learned a lot.
Experience: Half way into my second year at University studying Animation.
Time taken: Possibly a week for this version.