Adrian Winchell:

That's a lot of preroll but it's pretty important to the story you're telling so it's all good. Action's a bit twitchy tho' - and the big guy seems to have something wrong with his shoulders. Smooth it out, make it a little bit more physics-based (overlap, followthrough, anticipation, and body-balancing), and I think this could really go places!

Hannah:

He's offering that guy chicken like someone would offer a teenager a cigarette haha