Adrian Winchell:

I'd really like to see his acting a bit stronger, if we're gonna see just him for the entire thing. Everything's solid, but - I can hardly see his lipsync on some words, and he just doesn't seem to be very interested in the scene.

Clara Cornish:

Nice movements but maybe try pushing the facial expressions a bit (e.g his face would probably scrunch up a bit more as he tries to compute the lack of meat.) a nice start though. :)