Adrian Winchell:

Solid work, a little hard to critique at this long a distance. Maybe pull the camera in closer - at least to get rid of the gray border? The poses hit a little too sharply throughout, to the point of distracting - soften or bounce them maybe?

James Hornby:

it looks good, but at least for the start you could frame it ia little closer so we could read their faces a little easier

Sabrina Winkel:

Keep trying

Lucas Donaldson:

I love the extravagant movements here.