Final Rating: 3.55. Finished 158 out of 231 entries.

465 views including the voting period.


Animator: Saravanan Pvhs

Description: this time i try to my best

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 1week


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Adrian Winchell:

Animation's alright, but your crossing the 180 degree rule line constantly, making the characters appear to just be swapping places rather than a proper cut to the other side.

Richard Adams:

The constant shifting from camera to camera is distracting. Just use one camera, placed so you can see both faces at once.

David Meigh:

Not a bad start. Research camera's and 'Crossing the line'. Here we cross the line. when the cut happens between the characters, we end up in the same place, causing a pop in the image with no clear direction on story telling.
If you favour a side of the screen, 1 character always looking screen right, and one looking screen left. Because they both look screen right, throughout the shot, the viewer will no clearly establish connection with performance.

Ramsey Parks:

You switch between shots too many times. Almost makes me dizzy.

Lucas Donaldson:

It's got some nice movements. though the kids eyes look rather vacant. unless that's what you're going for with some possessed guy turning vegetarian.