Comments:
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Adrian Winchell:
Just needs more - more poses, more accent, more emotion, more everything. Nothing particularly sticky-outy, the basics are there, just need to spend more time giving the characters their acting.
Joep de Laat:
your camera does not focus on the active character, in the first shot you focus on the red man while he does not do a lot, while the blue man talks and moves and is not in focus. also switching a pose in a cut does not work with the continuity
Sabrina Winkel:
I like how the red guy touched his head at the end and love the acting
Kendra Kaye Coffey:
When he lifts the chickens they seem weightless.
Animator: Angell
Description: Rough rough Polish Pass.
Experience: 1 1/2 Years
Time taken: 4 Weeks