Final Rating: 3.57. Finished 153 out of 231 entries.

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Animator: Hajar Khakrand

Description: Please criticize my work

Experience: First experience in acting and lip syncing

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Vanni Alessio De Pieri:

could use lots more emotional expression in the face

Eric Raffle:

I feel you are moving the arms and not enough body movement, feels very stiff

Richard Adams:

The thing that sticks out the most as needing improvement, is dead facial expressions. Waiter's eyebrow movements are decent, but the rest of the faces need work.

Adrian Winchell:

The animation you have is pretty solid, but it needs more! These guys aren't really experiencing any emotionality, or reaction to each others' lines, they're just standing there. Might not want to cut back and forth so much either, it's disorienting and we don't get to see the other character's overlapping reactions to the lines!

Jyreme Mcmillon:

I really like some of the ideas you have in there.....I think some time could be spent loosening up the figures because right now they both feel rather stiff.