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Only bottles and a straw

by Lelo Strzal

Final Rating: 2.95. Finished 127 out of 136 entries.

294 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Lelo Strzal

Description: Tired of cleaning glasses, this guy is only using a straw to drink.

Experience: less than a month

Time taken: around 30 hours

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jean Lamy:

For you first animation, it's alright. Things you need to look in:
-Slow ins and slow outs, Walls, Timing, Posing appeal (Line of actions), Lip-sync. There's a lot more but focus on those for the next sound clip.

Heather Richmond:

Arm movements looks disconnected from the body.