Felipe Navarro:

The story is great, the animation seems like its on its first blocking stages.

Jake Love:

i laughed, props for that but you should spend a little more time on the facial expressions

Calvin:

missing a lot of animation in this one. i would have added inbetweens to make the animation a more fluid like

Heather Richmond:

Lip-sync is off.

Gabriella Caballero:

I like your anime style. The boy hold a glasses with spin too much.