Comments:
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James Cavanaugh:
I actually really like this! The acting choices are great and characters are very charming. my rating is more on the technical side: plan your arcs, make video reference act it out and take note of things you do unconciously (hip rotations and movement, overlapping action etc). the loose drawing consistency adds to the charm, but it doesn't feel by design
Ryan Hill:
You have a good imagination for storytelling. Continue working on this animation by nailing down your poses and improving the anatomy of your characters.
Samuel Couffe:
Be carefull, your main character becomes bigger during the shot, we can see it between f75 and f85, I don't know if it was intentionnal ^^ But I loved your mouvement and your poses ! Keep going animating ! :)
Animator: Levent Buktel
Description: Two neighbors sharing good thoughts on a peaceful sunday afternoon. It turns out to be otherwise..
Experience: Actively making animation since 2 years
Time taken: 1 week