Marten Visser:

With the last words there is too much movement in my opinion. I like the guy in the chair.

Ren Wilkey:

Bahahah extra points for the idea!

Fatemeh suori:

Very good

Cristy L. Einung:

Tom's arm gestures don't look natural, they are too literal to every word he says. Try acting out the scene to figure out what the body naturally does when speaking. Good luck!