Comments:
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Lauren Kimball:
Needs more movement. Also look into some fundamentals on staging your camera -- particularly the 180 rule.
Elisabeth Janerka:
Super confusing framing, can’t tell the two characters a part at all, and the amount of cuts could be fewer too
Animator: Dulce
Description: A normal day in the office
Experience: 2 moths
Time taken: A week