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Dragonflies and the frog

by Szilágyi Lili

Final Rating: 3.22. Finished 112 out of 121 entries.

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Animator: Szilágyi Lili

Description: This is a digitally created animation. It was made with: Illustrator, Photoshop and Premiere Pro.
Two dragonflies speak ill of the frog.

Experience: I have been learning as an animater since half year.

Time taken: 3 hours

Comments:

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Cody Cessna:

Looks like you put some effort into the illustration, but the animation was not ready to compete.

Catalina Montelongo:

Cute art! I wish the mouths moved more, though

Richard Felix B. Candia:

I like the idea but for me, I have no idea where to look at. So I think having a better composition would really help.

Alyssa FitzGerald:

While I like the character designs, I think it would server you better to just do pencil tests to focus on the animation. Also it's hard to tell if the frog is supposed to be speaking or if the yellow guy is supposed to be speaking because of how
the camera is blocked out.

Inacio:

I like the colours and characters, but please add more movement

Ben Zingo:

animation is very minimal here, seems like you spent most of your time on the drawing & coloring, and didn't spend as much time creating body language