Final Rating: 4.81. Finished 54 out of 121 entries.

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Animator: James Crumbo

Description: It just might be the 14th time today Kayla has asked Ray the same question.

Experience: Maybe 2 years

Time taken: 12-14 hours, not including playblast lighting.


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Catalina Montelongo:

I loved your facial expressions for him in the first line of his dialogue. I feel like it gave him extra depth outside of the audio

Paul David Panganiban:

I love the idea of a car conversation. You could improve this a lot if you shot a reference footage. As of camera angles, you could watch TV series/movies that have these type of shots and reference them.

Space Chicken:

Pulido de mano extremo


What happened to the hands?? Too much movement!


a bit stiff and the hand?


The story, camera and acting are all perfect, although there are a few minor flaws in the polishing.

Chosen one, the sky is the limit.

Bryce Hallett:

Really nice.
I think the girls animation works very well. Nice character acting on the boy.
I think maybe tone down his hand gestures just a little bit. It just looks like they are flailing a bit drastically. Maybe simplify them in to 2 or 3 main positions when he speaks. Good luck!

Lola Robey-Levine:

The best moments in here were when the focus was on the face - the arm movement at the end was too much, it would have been more effective to cut down on the amount of different gestures and hold them for longer where necessary