Final Rating: 5.59. Finished 28 out of 121 entries.

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Animator: Kantrell Ashley

Description: Mob boss deceives little girl into thinking that it is because she is using the "F" word, but his assistant brings light to the situation.

Experience: on and off, for a few years

Time taken: 5-6 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Raul Soria:

Awesome. Make the little girl and standing up character movements slightly faster.

Alyssa FitzGerald:

This is a fun scenario. A kid and a pair of mobsters.

At the very end though it feels a little weird with the male characters. It's like they're frozen almost.

Ben Zingo:

the posing and general timing are good, but actions feel disconnected, and the characters feel a bit lifeless. Try to think about what the characters are feeling, and what's going on in their head. The eyebrow movements are pretty subtle, and no one blinks.