Comments:
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Robinson Aguilera:
frame 112 killed this shot for me. Pose was way too dramatic. It comes across as bad soap opera acting. Next time try shooting reference to see more natural movements. Don't be discouraged I can see you have an understanding of animation just need to plan your acting better
Melody Dickens:
I feel it's a great start but could have used a bit more balance in the progress certain aspects seem more completed than others
Animator: Natalie
Description: A mentor explains to his naive apprentice about the "true" monsters unlike those in fairy tales.
Experience: None
Time taken: 2 weeks