Anthony:

The character movements, while strange and out of context, are at least smooth. But that's the only good thing I can say about this one. Skipping lip sync, really odd choices in poses and animations...

Thomas Zabski:

There is a lot of things to smooth out. I'd say that the small walk could use ironing out and the bending over could've been done more smoothly. If you did this in Maya, you can edit in the Graph Editor. If not Maya, there's probably something similar in your animation software.

The red and black guy is a bit of a mess with his right arm floating to its last position for 100 frames, freezing at the last few frames, and the stiff movement.