Comments:
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Erin Goddard:
decent start, your backgrounds are a bit too busy at first, it makes it hard to make out your characters. I would make sure your characters are clearer before worrying about shading the background scene. I like your story and the different camera angles though, keep it up!
Nicholas Green:
I'm finding hard to see the animation properly when the background is shaded and the character is transparent.
Animator: Tabitha
Description: Just a girl who is sad that her friend won't share a snack with her.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 3 weeks