Comments:
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Rebecca:
I think you could push the acting a bit more at the end as she sounds more dramatic then. Perhaps you could have the character completely slumped over to the ground in fetal position or something
Nicholas Green:
great idea, I love the way she slides down the food display maybe her facial expressions could be clearer.
Animator: Madvaer
Description: hi
Experience: 3
Time taken: 5