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Animator: Patrick Verlangieri

Description: a mental patient deals with an entity in his head

Experience: several as a 3D aniamtor much fewer as a 2D animator

Time taken: 3 weeks

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Lee:

Funny idea!

John Alston:

I'm not sure this isn't James Baxter's burner account..even the distortions have a sense of gravity.

I do think the "ooh" as an ending shot is not unlike "ending the sentence on a preposition,"

Not incorrect, but also frowned upon and questionable.

Willi Anton:

Love when his drags down his face! Overall nice squash and stretch while keeping the character’s proportions consistent.

Beril:

Love the puppet! Him gettin out of frame before the puppet gig also makes it funnier. The character finishing the movement of running his hands down his face before starting the "because youre not a real person" part would not only make his talking easier to understand and make his movements more recognizable but make the pacing better. Right now it feels slow and out of rhythm. Maybe tilting his head a little before he starts talking.