John Alston:

It's good, I don't think anything is wrong with it..I think showing a little more of the bear would add to the scenerio, but this is good.

Adele:

Aah man these expressions are great! The first shot could seem like it's a dragging a bit too long, but all those subtle movements in the character's face really pull you in and make up for it. And that shoulder roll was very nice too, every movement in here is very fluid!