Tobias Fuhr:

maybe you can emphasize some moments

Jesse Angri:

I really wish you had made the blonde girl the focus. She was animated so much better.

Rosario Salvatore:

not horrible, the character in the front was very distracting and I would suggest you work on the talking characters eye blinks and emotion. that said I like the fixing more then I should have

Nadia Ammari:

bad acting

ibet francisco:

The audience suppose to be watching the talking character. Not the other way around.

Valentious Williams:

idea was good ,work some more to really nail those poses and facial expressions .

ben malberg:

It's a good idea, and I like how you developed both characters. I was watching the speaking character until um, well you know... Then it got a little distracting, and I kind of didn't know where to look or what to think. lol It looked a bit floaty at the end, I might adjust the timing/spacing there. Especially when she starts putting the lipstick on.