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Finally Going Out

by Lee

Final Rating: 4.61. Finished 69 out of 179 entries.

581 views including the voting period.


Animator: Lee

Description: After personal troubles Mery is ready to go back to socialising.

Experience: 1 Year

Time taken: 2 Weeks


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Camera moves a little strict. Good effort.

ben malberg:

The pose in the beginning is really appealing, it grabbed my attention. The pose at f113 she looks evil there, I don't know if that was your intention or not but it caught my eye. The jump up is too fast I think, need some more time because of her mass. And after the jump the forward momentum suddenly disappears which I thought could use some more tuning. I think I saw your earlier submission on the forum, it's making progress. :)

Brent Forrest:



really like the slide down the chair

Amartya Mukherji:

Needs a lot of improvement

Benjamin Berg:

Here are a couple of notes and I hope it helps.

1. Your character feels very stiff.
2. The feel could use a polish pass.
3. Too many camera changes!

Good luck!