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need stronger poses
I like the look! :)
Animation of Mery was good but the animation of the man was a bit weak.
The beginning of the animation have a good timing, and feel good. For me the proportion of size of the girl and the man is completely wrong. With more work can be a good shot.
The Female looks to bigg compared to the male character. a bit disdurbing
Needs a lot of improvement
maybe the pose of "ready" should be more pushed.lookin good
Nice job! One nitpick I have is that the first two gestures she makes when she says "I'm excited and I feel relaxed" don't really work to me. They make the character come off as disinterested and tired.
Description: Guy has some hard times struggling with his issues while his wife get all crazy next to him :)
Experience: 3.5 years
Time taken: 6 days