Jessica "Jess" Jerome:

lacking animation fundamentals

Michael Launder:

i applaud the effort of entering a competition but this is not quite ready, its lacking a lot of key poses and lip synch. he has two key poses that stay perfectly still. I'd reccomend shooting reference with a camera or smartphone, that will give you a great starting off point.

Evan Helford:

You have the poses, but you need to zest it up, it feels very robotic as is.

Shaunak Das:

Jay Jörg Smith:

There should be more motion in the whole animation. The mouth is too stiff. Try also to think about a small story you want to tell ;)

Andrés Rosel:

Need to work on your lips and expressions.

Eddie Higgenbottom:

I don't get your story zazzit up with more humor.

Razam Ali:

what a joke?