Comments:
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Michael Launder:
good cut on action! the staging here is working great! the mouth shapes here feel a bit subtle, maybe some more narrows and exageration in the opening shapes could help bring it to life
Nassim Briedj:
hhhhh very funny
Daniel:
I like the story, but the poses and interpolation need some work. The facial movements, for example, seem to really disconnect from the words at times.
Jessica "Jess" Jerome:
very nice idea
Samidha Kumar:
nice idea but work on the anim principles
pankaj kushwaha:
good work keep it up :)
Megan Huggins:
Love the idea!
Kirby Drisdale:
I absolutely love your idea! All that was needed was a bit more cleanup to make the hunters movements smoother.
Gavin:
I loved the end frame with the smug smile
Animator: Michael O'Brien
Description: A nervous swan attempts to outwit a hunter with a "clever" disguise.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: About all month