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Michael Launder:
nice you're hitting key poses! but next i'd work on timing and getting them to really feel like they're alive. right now they feel like cg characters, does that make sense? they don't feel like they're really describing and listening to a description about a swan
Animator: Hai Miaan
Description: The story is about the boy who try to descript what he see just now
Experience: 1year
Time taken: 1week