Final Rating: 4.87. Finished 46 out of 142 entries.

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Animator: David Jordan Cox

Description: Two hunters go out to find a rare species of bird.

Experience: 1 Year

Time taken: 2 Weeks


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pankaj kushwaha:

good work keep it up :)


The thing that jumps out at me is that the guy on the right's hand is twisted completely to hold the gun. Maybe look up reference on how to hold a rifle. The animation itself is decent, but the lipsync could do with another pass.

Michael Launder:

nice key poses and follow throughs!

Jay Jörg Smith:

Nice little story you invented to that audio file. Overall animations look fine :) The last step of the right person looks a bit strange. Also the left one is doing to much movement in a short amount of time, but I like the posings :)

William Harrison:

The wrist of the rig on the right is broken, if you look at someone hold a gun the fingers should be where you have the palm. Other than that and a few minor fixes It looks good.