Comments:
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nabil:
Needs a lot of improvement
Jessica "Jess" Jerome:
lip sync could use more work
Michael Launder:
good start! really concentrate on hitting key poses and STICKING, lots of people have this problem where they float around and the actions feel goopy
Evan Helford:
I like the straight-forward approach, but there needs to be some holds for the poses. Like at frame 61, and 166, he could hold that pose so it doesn't feel so floaty.
Animator: Daniel
Description: Just a guy trying to describe a swan.
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: 1.5 weeks