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Describe that swan, baby.

by Daniel

Final Rating: 3.08. Finished 121 out of 142 entries.

478 views including the voting period.


Animator: Daniel

Description: Just a guy trying to describe a swan.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 1.5 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)


Needs a lot of improvement

Jessica "Jess" Jerome:

lip sync could use more work

Michael Launder:

good start! really concentrate on hitting key poses and STICKING, lots of people have this problem where they float around and the actions feel goopy

Evan Helford:

I like the straight-forward approach, but there needs to be some holds for the poses. Like at frame 61, and 166, he could hold that pose so it doesn't feel so floaty.