Comments:
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Michael Launder:
the animation is okay quality. what's important is the camera staging, you need to establish the characters using the 180 degree rule. you're doing whats called jumping the line and its awkward to look at for the viewers
Rodrigo Coronado:
Good work, try to have a steady camera instead of too many cuts so it can help you with the acting
Animator: Syed Nabeel Haider
Description: An officer is randomly investigating from a mentally disturb person in the park.
Experience: 1 Year
Time taken: 2 days