Michael Launder:

nice keys! next up is working on your tweens getting nice beautiful arcs in the motion! and then follow throughs!

Kirsten Schow:

Animation still needs a lot of polish; everything is quite robotic, the lip sync needs more fluid movement. the story concept didn't get through to me, however, until the last second, so I was wondering what was going on in this. Keep going! :)

Michael Kristiansen:

Getting there. Some secondary animation would suit it, so It does'nt feel stiff when a character is not saying stuff.

Gavin:

HA! nice ending frame