Comments:
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Scott:
There were a number of cuts in here. Try reducing that down to reduce jarring the viewer.
Johann Wong:
Whole piece is already working, just seem bit floaty & lacking secondaries on certain parts.Tighten overall animation & lipsync shapes. Certain parts of the timing & action could be quicker or exaggerated.
Lea:
Lovely - felt very natural throughout.
Animator: Dixon Wong
Description: This is my first submission to the 11 Second Club. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: About 2 weeks, 3-4 hrs a day.