Johann Wong:

Hmm..really lacking in-between poses & timing here. Everything looks stiff. Keep practicing, you'll get better! ;)

Luke Coleman:

You've got some of the main poses down, you need to go between them and more keys to the facial expressiosn and body motions to flesh out the animation.

Monica Stringer:

very robotic and unnatural movement, you need to get a better understanding of mouth shape for sound, maybe make a reference of you saying the lines, and your lip sync cuts off sometimes