Johann Wong:

Hmm..hardly anything going on, here. Explore more poses, arc & timing next time, yeh. ;)

Chad Cox:

maybe show some dialogue? lol

Luke Coleman:

-Some basic lip and eye movements would make a lot of difference.
-Try and avoid using silhouettes for the backs of characters (some colour or shading would make a difference)
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Felipe Navarro:

The characters did not have emotion, you went away from lip syncing.....

Jordan Lewers:

Dark colors on dark background make it difficult to read the characters' movements, especially with the female