Comments:
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Zoe Piel:
A little too zippy for the dialogue.
Johann Wong:
Guy animation could be simplified at the beginning. Watch out for them repetitive movements at the beginning too. ( Guy's left arm).
Overall animation could use more arc, tighter timings & cushioning.
Donald Marks:
Decent Start. A bit overacted, and the man's mouth shapes are a bit off putting for me.
Andrew DiLullo:
A lot of sudden and jagged movements. The actions are so extreme for such a mellow delivery of dialogue
Brad Bradbury:
in my opinion,
the actions and movements are too big for the slow pased dialog.
Monica Stringer:
the mix of realism with heavy cartoon elements is really jarring
Animator: Lennard Cheam
Description: An arrogant and oblivious husband learns that his wife has divorced him way ahead.
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: 2 weeks (in total)