Zoe Piel:

You captured the feel of the dialogue really well here.

Francisco Leon:

It's good, but need more eloquence in the expresions and movements, a little bit of energy. Keep it up!

Johann Wong:

Needs more movements, the changes are a bit too subtle. (Play around with the cup, etc)

Donald Marks:

Some more poses would really push this up a notch. As it is now, they kind of stay seated totem-like in the same pose pretty much throughout. A nice weight shift or two would be great.

Luke Coleman:

Some more movement in the eyes / eyesbrows and eyes lids on the female character. Body poses are too rigid for both characters, suggest looking into micro gestures / expressions.

A F:

The guy could use a bit more subtle movements, he is completely still for some frames from time to time. Decent work overall, though.