Johann Wong:

Overall looks stiff & floaty. Could use a little more changes in poses here & the lipsync could be a lil simpler, bit too much going on.

Hajar Khakrand:

i love the feeling in her eyes... so real!

Facu Caballero:

Poor

Luke Coleman:

For the final shot, the camera needs to be in a different position, or the female character needs to lower the book to see her facial movements.
The character movements in the first shot are lacking, suggest looking into micro gestures and expressions.

A F:

Nice subtle take on the scene, the guy's face could use a bit more expression, though, especially on the close-up. The book is a nice way to cover up her mouth, too. ;)